Voices Poem by Jasmin Dalton

Voices

Rating: 5.0


tormenting at times
but comforting at others
like shadows for me
to which only i can see

They are not crimes
yet forms of another?

with constant thoughts
up holding no posture

Spoken only to me
for which i have one plea,
untie these knots
and return my composure

Thursday, May 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 23 May 2014

Good morning poet Jasmin. I enjoyed the poem and thought the title was great as well! Loyd

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Md Elias Uddin 18 May 2014

Spoken only to me for which i have one plea, untie these knots and return my composure nice imagination.

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Suman Kumar Das 18 May 2014

Wonderful write..............Dear! ..............liked it. May God bless you.

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Edwina Reizer 16 May 2014

Just read your poem Voices and that was after I sent you my message. It is a good poem Jasmin and most meaningful not only to the reader but to you. Edwina Reizer

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