Visit To Paradise Poem by V P Mahur

Visit To Paradise

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Whenever I wish to visit a paradise, I retire into the solitude
For me it’s the loveliest way to think over my own attitude

The sound of peace rings in my ear like a loving friend’s gratitude
I want to feel of you singing for me in a heart tempting amplitude

We walk peacefully in the garden and reach upto the high altitude
Yonder I see a rippling of the waves in the calm ocean as hued

The soft charming wind makes me asleep on the cold subdued
None can steal my memories that multiply with a moment of aptitude

I cover myself with the dust of your pain that is finely chewed
I paint a picture of dark lines that is figured and cautiously reviewed

Tuesday, April 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on April 09,2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Perveiz Ali 08 April 2014

Imagination at its best

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Bill Cantrell 08 April 2014

Wonderful meditation down memory lane, the joy of golden moments gone by. Excellent write.

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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