Verse Poem by Sarah Persson

Verse

Rating: 4.7


My mind, a field of red,
A work of art within my head,
My eyes, a solemn green,
Casting glances, never seen.

The curtain falls in graceful scenes
And all around the cosmos breathes,
Have you seen the blues of deep?
I go there in my dreams to sleep.

Parting ways, a lovers tiff,
I'm left to wonder, why? What if?
A poem, tempting, tasting words,
Softening lines with gentle verse.

Verse
Wednesday, May 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emotion,mystery,wisdom,wonder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hebert Logerie Sr. 02 May 2018

This is a beautiful and mystical poem. Great imagination!

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Sarah Persson 02 May 2018

Thank you Herbert

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Muhammad Ali 02 May 2018

A kind of saying a prayer, enjoying the beautiful blessings of feelings. your way to say a thought is wonderful.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 April 2020

The curtain falls in graceful scenes And all around the cosmos breathes, Have you seen the blues of deep? I go there in my dreams to sleep.......have you seen the blues of deep. what a fine poetic question. very fine poem dear poetess Sarah. God bless you. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 September 2019

A poem, tempting, tasting words, Softening lines with gentle verse// wow, superb expression on poetic verse

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 June 2018

What a beautiful poem! Appreciate the style of penning! The flow is just immaculate! 10

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Sarah Persson 11 June 2018

Thank you Dr Swain, your comments are extremely generous

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Akhtar Jawad 09 June 2018

Parting ways, a lovers tiff, I'm left to wonder.Why? What if? A poem, tempting, tasting words, Softening lines with gentle verse. Beautiful Poem.

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Sarah Persson 09 June 2018

Thank you Akhtar

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RAJI.C.N 22 May 2018

Congrats! your mind, your dreams..and you have a beautiful poem.. loved these lines.. Have you seen the blues of deep? I go there in my dreams to sleep. A poem, tempting, tasting words, Softening lines with gentle verse Happy writing!

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Sarah Persson

Sarah Persson

Wellington, Shropshire
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