Valentine Novel Poem by Young Church Poetry
Valentine Novel
Your Eyes
I met your eyes, beautiful eyes
I fell in love with your eyes, true eyes
Very sincere eyes, adorable and honest eyes
The moment I look at your eyes, I fall in love
Again and again
It's like your eyes guide the love to my veins
Travels through, hits my heart so deep
Emotions fly high like a leisure jet
Kind of a happy am I dreaming feeling
Those eyes take me to a place I have never been to
A place where the blue ocean meets the blue sky
I mean where can you find those two together, amazing
Exactly the beauty that cannot be described, but be seen
Those beautiful big eyes are not fiction, reason you are
My valentine
Remember the day I was staring at you the whole day?
Let me make you understand, stare at the night sky
Stare at the moonlight covering Thabana Ntlenyane
Our "beautiful little mountain" as known
It is then that you will understand the beauty of your eyes
Now you know how much of a gift your eyes are
My valentine
Sweeter than Ferrero Rocher, more beautiful than
The roses, unwritten words more special than
From gift cards
You are my forever valentine gift, I will always
Love you
Ever since we met, your eyes sparkle with true love.
THE END.
Oh poet, you have created a beautiful world for the Valentine. The eyes you met have changed your whole universe. Your beautiful emphasis on her eyes will make the reader mad at your poem. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations for being picked as members POD.
The title of your poem is so sweet and there is something special within your name. Who needs gift cards. It is pure love and chocolate that captures our hearts.
What a wonderful poem! You have described eyes so immaculately! Many congratulations for this lovely poem being chosen as POD!
I know this to be a work of fiction, because nothing can be sweeter than Ferrero Rocher. Of course, if you are young and in love, the senses can be addled somewhat; so I will believe that the author is young and truly in love. You create a few very strong, engaging images here; I would encourage even more to fill out your work. Bravo.
The Author is young and believes in true love. Thank you very much for your comment Seamus.
Splendid is love, when in love.. congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Congrats, she must be having chocolate eyes sweeter than Ferrero Rocher, alovely poem.
She does have amazing eyes, thank you very much Akhtar.