Valentine Poem by Pankazz koirala Upadhayaya

Valentine

Rating: 4.5

Astaune pratit nahos
Mutuma merei naam rahos,

Valentine ma vetne timro binty
Kopilo gulab timro nimty,

Meri preyasi....
Maan manama gumsiyeka chahana
Prakat tin sabdako boli
Pratiksya cha timro jawab matrako
Muskayera hasnu kehi naboli.

Mitho kalpana sajayeko chu
Maan manmei ramayeko chu
Prem parbako pabitra dinama
Upahar gulab lyayeko chu.
Tyo gulab namurjhayos
Maanama sadhei fakri rahos,
Pabitra prem sarthak vayera
Junni vari hamro prem pratik banos.

Meri preyasi....
Hamro pabitra prem
Sadhei moulai rahos,
Astaune pratit nahos,
Timro mutuma sadhei
Merei naam rahos.

Thursday, February 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 24 October 2017

A good attempt, Pankazz. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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