Vacation Is Over Poem by Kevin Fang

Vacation Is Over

Rating: 4.8


I had lots of vacation,
went swimming and biking.
I went to the train station,
because I wanted to go hiking.

I had a lot of fun,
until the day is done.
I ate a big bun,
that weighs about a ton.

When vacation was done,
it was really, really sad.
I couldn't have any, anymore Fun!
This made me really, really Mad!

Forget about vacation,
it is now September.
I have to go to the train station,
to get to school, I remember.

Vacation Is Over
Friday, October 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: summer,summer time ,vacation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 02 January 2016

a clean realistic poem.

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Tristan Machado 23 October 2015

Good writing Kevin. I enjoyed reading it and looking at the visual.

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Kelly Kurt 16 October 2015

Don't apologize for writing, Kevin. Just keep writing.

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Kevin Fang 26 October 2015

thanks!

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Kevin Fang 16 October 2015

sorry! The end was messed up.

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Kevin Fang 16 October 2015

Enjoy the poem! This is not that good, but still, please enjoy the poem!

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