Uttered By My Father, A Haiku Poem by Denis Mair

Uttered By My Father, A Haiku



Maples are bright but
Oaks have a helluva range
In the bronzes

Monday, September 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,colors,father and son,scenic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When I was twelve years old, my mother moved to a town twenty-five miles away, and I remained with my father. My father supervised a machine shop, which kept him quite busy, so I was accustomed to solitude, even on weekends. I treasured the hours when my father would drive with me to visit my mother. Those monthly rides through the countryside gave me a chance to talk with my father. He had a poetic way of speaking which had a tremendous influence on me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 28 September 2018

Your father's aesthetic sense must be very powerful, it's reflected in your poems.

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Bharati Nayak 10 September 2018

Maples may be bright But oaks have a helluva range In shades of bronze - - - - - - A lovely haiku..Nature changes color with seasons.Life too changes.But childhood memories have a special place in life.

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Denis Mair 10 September 2018

My father liked to make observations about beautiful things he saw. After first frost, maples display crimson, orange or yellow leaves, but like gaudy clothes they are quickly shed. After oak leaves turn brown they remain on the tree for a long time. On some trees their color is butternut or light tan; on some a muted bronze; on others they have a deep chestnut color. My father noticed the subtle variations. I owe my aesthetic sense to him.

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