Used To A Cage Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Used To A Cage

Rating: 5.0


Hidden in the heart of a sweet beloved,
the bird is confined in a lovely cage,
he gave up the habit of flying,
he knew the skies are merely mirage,
he'll not go, you may open the gates,
passing his life like a saint and sage,
don't disturb he's happy there,
his nibs are sharp, you may face his rage!

Used To A Cage
Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 11 November 2015

Lovely expression of love and attachment depicted in these beautiful lines

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

Hidden in the heart of a sweet beloved, the bird is confined in a lovely cage, ...Very humorous and metaphoric poem shared on love and art definitely. Interesting and wise drafting shared...10

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Kelly Kurt 11 November 2015

A wonderful metaphor. Interpreted in many ways

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M Asim Nehal 11 November 2015

Superb, those who are in the cage of love they seldom think of freedom and enjoyment....Liked it Janab...10+++

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Loke Kok Yee 10 November 2015

lots of food without working no wonder he is not leaving thank you sir-10

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