Untitled Haiku Attempt #1 (Uha 1) Poem by Celt Merlyn

Untitled Haiku Attempt #1 (Uha 1)



Friendship gained or lost
Fiber optic illusion
Speak- Is this not so?

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Trade Martin 30 January 2007

Celt, I'm not a haiku expert, but I've written a few decent ones. It seems you've got the basic form right and it sounds fine to me....! ! ! Keep up the nice work...! ! ! Best, T.M..

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