Unthreading Poem by Satish Verma

Unthreading

Rating: 5.0


It was a damp kiss
of an image.
Dispassionately you drop
an old coin into my hands.

Faithless in your poem.
I adored the Venus in twilight.
Carnation. A rose pink color,
appears in your eyes.

Rising from the marshy
slush, greater flamingos
keep watch underneath, at the
army of urns.

The sameness now dithers.
You want to weave the moon
in your breast, unpreparing
to open the heart.

Sunday, May 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Ratnakar Mandlik 31 May 2016

Beautiful poem rich in rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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