Unsaid Things Poem by Jacqueline Louw

Unsaid Things



My heart is broken, burning like fire
being with you is my hearts desire
i waited all my life for someone like you
a heart so gentle, giving love so true

The mean things i said about our love
is tearing apart our blessing from above
I love you with my heart and my soul
Cant you understand?

The only way we couldve made it was by holding His hand
Why do you do the things you do and say
Its blowing my trust in you away

I dont want to be friends, I dont want you gone
without your love, hugs and kisses its not easy to go on

Tears in my eyes cant take the pain away
without you nothing can pull me trough a day

How can i describe how im feeling
Its just me taking things seriously
and now even crying doesnt bring healing

You said you dont love me but how could it be?
We were soulmates you and me
You said you can feel it u know it in your heart
so why do keep pushing tearing us apart.

You say that you dont want me
and i should just let it be
Cant you remember our dreams
are they flowing away like water streams?

We were perfect two of a kind
just a little more patience and you couldve find
that nothing is impossible if you just believed
in me in us together it seemed

I dont want to loose you now not ever
I want you by my side forever
Thats how it should be, you, me, together

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 16 October 2008

Jacqueline, we can never be too sure about anything, especially when it comes to relationships. We pour our feelings out to the 'one' we feel is going to be there for us, and we never even give a thought that they will turn and go somewhere else. They say woman is a fickle creature, but we have nothing over men. Men are always looking over the fence thinking the love there is better than what he has now. That is what breaks the heart and tears at the very fabric of our souls. The emotional outpouring here is one that brings tears of sadness to my eyes, because I know what being loved, and then being dumped is all about. But chin up girl, you will find someone that will love you always, and never stray. This is very well written with lots of images...I give you another 10 for this. Hugs, Barbara

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