Unfulfilled Undertow Poem by John Kipling Lewis
Unfulfilled Undertow
Rating: ★3.3
I feel the world
is rolling over me
and the undertow
of people's unfulfilled
expectations threatens
to pull me out to the sea
full of life, without a breath
Friday, February 24, 2006
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Kath Moore
05 November 2007
4. The undertow metaphor could work if it was approached through concrete details but this is just surface-level skimming. (Pun intended.)
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5/7/2024 9:07:06 AM # 1.0.0.1119
It reminds me of a reoccurring gream I used to have, so obviously I can relate to it. Good one!