'Unfulfilled Love Stories' Poem by Aishaf Rehman

'Unfulfilled Love Stories'

Rating: 5.0


In the dark night,
While seeing the sky,
I wondered why these stars are Twinkling?
Suddenly someone whispered in my ear,
'These are unfulfilled love stories which
Will be fulfilled in the heaven.
They are Twinkling and giving hope to those
Whose stories are not fulfilled in this
World'

Monday, June 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: blue
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ayman Parray 23 June 2015

Wonderful poem, Aisha. I like the way you think, brilliant thoughts. Thank you.

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Aisha Rehman 23 June 2015

Thanks you Ayman Parray! :)

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Ayman Parray 10 July 2015

It is wonderful to watch the sky at night and will be now even more so thinking of this beautiful poem.

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Shabeeh Haider 04 April 2016

a very wonderfully written poem. keep it up

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Shabeeh Haider 04 April 2016

very creative and a wonderful poem, A pleasure to read

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 April 2016

These are unfulfilled love stories which Will be fulfilled in the heaven. ohhhhh such a wonderful imagination. really so touching. thank you dear poet.

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Roseann Shawiak 27 August 2015

Wonderful portrayal of unfulfilled stories, interesting and imaginative array of thought you have pictured in my mind. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn.

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Aisha Rehman 10 July 2015

Thank you Ayman Parray! Touched by your words.

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