Unfolded Story Poem by Bonnie Collins

Unfolded Story

Rating: 5.0


Crying alone in the chapel and
searching for an answer that
was never to be found, alone,
looking for the light at this non
existant tunnel of hell

Searching for a reconsiable
ground that can be a reprive
for what have been ages and
years of hell

It has boiled down to the very
end, and I didnt even know
How many more secrets will
now have its unfolded story......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bonnie I hope you were crying in the chapel long ago a I would need to give you a big hug. Many problems or secrets have been swept under the carpet, especially years ago as people were not as up front as they are now. The title 'Untold Story' is a chapter of life that you so cleverly write of as a missing piece of life. You mastered again, an excellent poem. Karin Anderson

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Andrew Blakemore 22 January 2009

A deeply moving poem Bonnie, your images tell stories so well, you really are one talented lady. Love, Andrew xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 January 2009

Yet, every story, every chapter...has an ending....Which opens one's eyes and time to create another story, a better one...a new chapter, if you will... in one's everpaging book of life....Excellent work here, young lady...This piece flows with virtual metre perfection.... F j R 2009

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Sadiqullah Khan 22 January 2009

As we progress in life we face many questions. The story is unfolded but we can make life beautiful on our own. Well poised lines

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