Is it the tear measures hate and love?
Is it the laughter gages one’s kindness?
Is it the fame evaluates the popularity?
Or is it the failure determines the necessity?
If there’s no end
How to determine the beginning?
If there’s no ugly
How to assess the beautiful?
If there’s no excellent
How to distinguish the fool?
If there’s no big
How can we notice small?
i will post even if this is unfinished...thnks for all...
excellent abstract poem, thank you for sharing..10++++++++++
How to assess the beautiful? If there’s no excellent How to distinguish the fool? If there’s no big.................unruly may never rule but only beautiful and intellegent...there is an end to everythig and everything ends so quickly too.....lovely write...10
Well, I've known you not to finish what you start out to do....So much logic to this poem Naizz, and I know you have the poetic skill, and soul to complete this loving wonder.....Keep at it sweetheart....you can do it....I know you can ;)
finish this piece dear lady...you're on the right track 'cause you asked logical questions.
Maybe unfinished.... but the sentiments it expresses have done it all!
Where is the beginning? Where is the end? Do we know from where The love descends? Or we just condescend! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP
What is time without love? What is love without time? What's the highest mountain like Without a valley nestled at its feet? What's a river without a bend To guide its flow to where it should end? What am I without you? What is life without love? Well, it's me with all the time, Time to think about the love We hardly had the time to share; Now my life's without love Our love just never had time, Now we've run out of moments To save our love in time What is pleasure without pain? What is sunshine with no rain? What's the moon without the sun To take its place when night is gone? If the sea were without the sky, Just where would the horizon lie? What's hello without goodbye? What is life without you? Well, it's me with all the time, Time to think about the love We hardly had the time to share; Though my life's without love You are my love for all time, Though we've run out of moments To save our love in time Though my life's without love You are my love for all time Though we've run out of moments To save our love in time
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lazy rabbit finish the poem... Well I felt it was ok.... still a good write