Unfaithful Love Poem by PRINCESS obong

Unfaithful Love

Rating: 5.0


You were the stars and i was the night
Every moment i spent with you felt so right
We ran through the woods climbed up the trees
Hunted the bears and got stung by the bee's
And even though the moon interfered with the day
I was still yours some how some way
And even though i knew the whole time
That i was yours but you were'nt mine
You looked me in the eye's and constantly lied
But look whose stuck crying not you but I
Angry came the storm heavy came the rain
Without you my dear my heart lies in vain
But it's not your fault your not the blame
I tried to take what was'nt mine, mine to claim
And the greatest lesson ever learned
Its not what you get but it's what you've earned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asia Joseph 25 August 2008

very nice, pls comment, keep writing

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ngaio beck 06 August 2008

Where there is ego, all love is unfaithful.There is always ego.

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Sid John Gardner. 30 May 2008

Sometimes in a affair three people cry, The person who smiles all the way to the love bank is the person who gets the benefit of one person's dispair on the rebound. Take care, Sid.

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Aury Cecile 30 May 2008

I like this poem a lot and I think a lot of people can relate to it. Great writing! My favroite line is 'Angry came the storm, heavy came the rain' because it means the most to me. Thanks for this great poem! Could you please read some of mine and tell me what you think? I'd appericiate it. Thanks!

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Staten island, New York
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