Under Earth-Lit Night Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Under Earth-Lit Night



Book six days seven nights on Earth's moon
For a lifetime's chance sooner than soon,
And under Earth-lit light
Spend honeymoon's rare night,
And return owning a desert dune
(Feeling like a short-changed one more Lune!)
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The way to Moon is set on course with India's launch of Moon Mission, Chandrayan-2. Whilst we wait for the Moon Lander to land on Moon, one can visualize a few tour promoting adverts a la this Limerick. Of course, the sixth line given in a bracket they won't expressly say. Happy journey!
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Tongue-in-cheek |21.07.2019|

Tuesday, July 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: humour,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2019

Brilliantly expressed. A nice limerick has been created on Chandrayan-2.. Thank you dear sir for sharing this interesting poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 July 2019

Thanks indeed, you know, this humour sometimes goes out of hand, and may draw reactions never imagined ere. Chandrayan-2, even before the successful operations of landing of the Moon Lander, and moon walk of the Rover, is a big achievement. The humour is really addressed elsewhere.

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Kostas Lagos 23 July 2019

Nice limerick Aniruddha!

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 July 2019

Thank you very much, and I know when you say 'Nice limerick' you mean well, yet, however this word 'nice' it its journey (etymology) , has undergone so much change that today in some sense it has acquired negative connotations. But all we poets have are words, and words only.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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