Unbreakable Poem by OlafSebastian Krysik

Unbreakable

Rating: 3.8


They call love the strongest bond in the world
Yet they still dare to question it
The truth? I don’t know.
Then what do I know?

One; you are beautiful
Two; I want to be with you
Three; I care for you
Four; I need you
Five; you complete me


I would write you more but I only have five fingers as the other hand is holding
yours. Unbreakable.

Thursday, July 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A few years ago I was sad and remembered the love my mother always grants me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 July 2015

Very romantic love poem, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned from the heart with conviction. Indeed love is the greatest bond, because it's a spiritual unification of two hearts, with natural mutual affinity for each other. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 16 July 2015

A sweet poem, Olaf. Thanks for sharing

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Thank you very much and you are welcome :)

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