Unborn Poem by Abraham de la Torre

Unborn

Rating: 5.0


Antoine's torment
is shared
remembering murder
silent without a grave
crimson clots
hesitant and hurrying
towards the drain
not recalling
hearing a prayer
nor a requiem
for Monica
or was it as Mozart
as his clay.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 20 February 2009

well, i cant say anything wrong about your poem. good job

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Ency Bearis 12 November 2008

a truthful verses..well expressed..great one... Ency Bearis

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Joseph Poewhit 11 November 2008

True - we all need a blueprint of some sort.

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Abraham de la Torre

Abraham de la Torre

Bacacay, Albay, Philippines
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