Two Birds And The Electrical Wires Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Two Birds And The Electrical Wires

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I have seen a couple of birds on the electrical wires,
The male bird, bold and fond of sexy adventures,
The female sitting on the neutral, excited but shy,
Was it love, or one of the life's adverse caricatures?

Why you excite us to kiss round arms and coral lips,
O God! Why you gave us the instinct of a sexy love?
The two birds kissed and were turned in the ashes,
Thanks, you never appeared to me as a lovely dove!

Two Birds And The Electrical Wires
Thursday, June 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 June 2020

Typo..... Superb imagery. Beautifully crafted and well conveyed write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 June 2020

A very lovely poem that captures a unique and one of a kind love. Suoerb imagery. This poem resonates with me. I often see birds perch on the electric wires.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 June 2020

join the two wires and watch the flames dames first excitement comes than man's mostly men come first mainly east or western but dames hold the games in as in audition boys image must be maintained no fame no blame else all will say o what a shame it was a really hot playful game now we have been left no not ashamed but with no name we show or appear now as lame dames still on top remain...SIR ROMANTIc SCISSORS we two On PH without us what'll others do I ask you

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Kevin Patrick 18 June 2020

A wonderful image that successfully conveys the intricacies of male and female relationships, there love was electric.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 June 2020

A brilliant poem sir! Thanks for sharing...........10+++++++++++++

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