Though we both lay here together
we're a hundred worlds apart
different memories; different demons
different Spirits; different Hearts
Though we may embrace each other
Eternally, we stay alone
Though we both lay here together
we're just two autumn leaves
the wind has blown.
Nice :) leaves have many colours and variations, these are just two of them! Great work :)
one of your best for sure. - - i believe you will be quite popular in years to come.
Stirring... This is a beautiful piece Ray, and I agree, one of the best I've read in a while, which draws me to want to read more from you. Great Ink! :) -Kelly.
Yes..just two autumn leaves, the wind blow us. We are next to each other but we are not together~ touchy..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is my favourite from what I've read already, a great simile poem that delivers. And delivers more than well. Thanks for sharing and simply enjoy life. Take care.