Trying To Catch The Sun Poem by Lamerre Lucie

Trying To Catch The Sun

Rating: 3.9


On the sand I stand,
Here, in front of the ocean.
My eyes gazing at the horizon,
My body as cold as could be.

They say: 'You get as much as you give'
And the sea pulls its waves up to the shore
And the wind blows the birds away.

I'm trying to catch the Sun,
Trying and wanting to give up

The Sun high and proud
Mocks me, looks down on me;
It knows about my weakness,
It knows about my hopes.

I want the ocean to roar at me,
I want the wind to blow me away,
I want to catch the Sun,
And to lose myself into its light.

Trying To Catch The Sun
Wednesday, August 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,dreams,ocean,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 03 March 2016

A lovely poem that emphasizes the role the sun plays in our lives. We know there also a danger and yet it can even be a friend. Read mine - Night Creeps - Adeline

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Howard Savage 03 January 2016

Catching the sun, you will always be in the light. good writing.

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Lucie Lamerre 03 January 2016

Oh, thank you so much :)

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Rajnish Manga 26 August 2015

Entire poem is a treat to our senses as it draws inspiration from nature. I have enjoyed reading it. A quote from the poem: I want to catch the Sun, And to lose myself into its light.

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