Tropical.....Rain Poem by trinity aana

Tropical.....Rain

Rating: 4.5


dense proliferating cool as in hot can be
not a sun beam for months augmented
the rotten leaves beneath
smouldering, nauseatingly sweet, choking
steam rising from the ground
dizziness vertigo centralising the system
moths hover centipedes crawl
A widow giant black spinning silky lacey noose
relishing newly acquired widowhood, saintly
eternally, calmly, lounging impartible for another
widowhood....
till then lonely.lonesome, alone conjuring............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 30 October 2006

This is an amazing piece... you do have a distintive style. The way you express makes the blood vessels rush. Indeed - the emotions float up on the screen as your words on this page....

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