Another Life Time: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : After Life................... Poem by trinity aana

Another Life Time: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : After Life...................



a life gone by.....suspectedly self sustaining
it ignited self.....self immolating
courageously it pass itself by..............
its another life....time.....
it is now ethereal,
it is now ephemeral
it is now euphoric
life after life, a span of a rainbow,
its a, , , shipwreck of a life time,
we are gona swim out, , , , riding on the sea waves,
waves lashed high and might...........rocked the ship
surf the same waves, , , , , , current under our feet.......buoyant
swim ashore..........wonderland.........
this is my Utopia...............my after life........another........time...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 October 2008

A philosophical thought written well. You may read my 'the concept of the soul'

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Sadiqullah Khan 24 April 2008

diffucult subject, , , , utopia and afterlife, , wrtten well

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Abha Sharma 26 March 2008

ethereal.., ephemeral.., euphoric.., this alliterative diction has made the theme interesting, although the subject being too philosophical. a truely utopic kind.., well written.

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Kee Thampi 16 February 2007

life after life, a span of a rainbow, its a, , , shipwreck of a life time, we are gona swim out, , , , riding on the sea waves love and snickers in real life and more...swim ashore..........wonderland.........

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