Transparent Love- The Gift Of You! Poem by Chuy Amante

Transparent Love- The Gift Of You!

Rating: 5.0


Pure you, distilled to the core,
your you-ness onstage not a bore!

Nothing but your thoughts, actions, desires
all the rest burnt on the hot ego fires

Just the experience of you clean and pure
loved by another, her drug and her cure!

two being real for sure 24/7
a dance very real, it's truly heaven!

Transparent Love- The Gift Of You!
Saturday, September 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: honesty,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2020

Nothing but your thoughts, actions, desires all the rest burnt on the hot ego fires....... outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem on love and honesty is amazingly shared. Five stars.

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