Transformation Of Love Poem by olawale famodun

another point: haiku don't have a title.. - but the 1st line can be use as a title -

it's a good write, Olawale, but not a haiku. First, it is about human nature, not Nature - meaning it's a senryu, not a haiku. But you have to modify the 1st line. A haiku, like a senryu, has to have a 5-7-5 syllabic structure. A senryu doesn't need a kigo, so it's ok (but also a tiny minority of japanese classical haiku don't express a kigo) . Peace

In three lines you have said a lot... Thank you for sharing...

don't get pessimistic, love will come with its colour, you just wait, nice poem, well- composed,