Trance Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

Trance



The Trance

I sit on my stationary bike for half an hour a day,
it is incredibly boring if I have nothing to occupy my mind.
Today there was a stream of thought I waded out but
found it full old junk - junk can also be new- so I built
a wall of numbers to keep the rivulet away.
I fell into a trance, or think I did; an hour had past
when I looked at the watch, an hour had gone a new record.
The pressure of the flowing thought broke the wall
and sceptical I was not sure if I had had my exercise or
been asleep on the bike?

Tuesday, November 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dawn Novus 28 November 2017

That is the ideal all attain to whilst getting your daily constitution! I hope you can do it each time poet. Thanks for sharing this.

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Upendra Upm 28 November 2017

brilliantly chasing the thought flow and studying it , its direction, magnitude, .....wading through the stream of thought is brilliant expression...

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