4 Haiku For The Spirit Poem by Jan Oskar Hansen

4 Haiku For The Spirit

Rating: 4.8


4 Haiku for the spirit

To fly far away
Let clouds absorb unhappiness
Tears a summer lake

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Melancholy
Unburden my heart of grief
Leave as morning fog

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As an eagle soar
Weightless for a second
As an oak leaf falls

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The burden of mist
Obscuring dawn`s brilliance
Silent is the house

Friday, December 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jane Campion 26 June 2019

Definitely haiku for the spirits. Wonderful penning dear Oskar. Congratulations on your poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 June 2019

A fabulous prime poem of the day. Congrats, sir Jan Oskar for being picked......10++++++++

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Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

Melancholy Unburden my heart of grief Leave as morning fog superb haiku great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Sy Wong. 26 June 2019

Haiku! Spirit lifting haikus. Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 June 2019

" The burden of mist Obscuring dawn's brilliance Silent is the house" Mind blowing imagery. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Manpreet Singh 27 June 2019

" As an eagle soar Weightless for a second As an oak leaf falls" Is it just me or anyone else felt empathy in these lines.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 26 June 2019

Definitely haikus of great relevance which raise the conscious to a high level. Wonderful haikus.

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Bharati Nayak 26 June 2019

Each Haiku so beautiful- -Let me quote one- - Melancholy Unburden my heart of grief Leave as morning fog

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2019

To fly far away! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ruta Mohapatra 26 June 2019

Liked the last one the best. Congrats on poem of day!

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