To You... Poem by Musa Ochieng Odeny

To You...

Rating: 4.8


your brilliant eyes,
your cheerful smile,
your soothing voices,
your charming speech,
your composed posture,
your assured strides,
your confident aura,
your modest dress-code,
And genuine concern,
are worth admiring,
inspiring and rejuvenating,
may you successfully,
prosper in life and take,
take good care of yoursely.
I thank God for your life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 15 January 2012

Really great poem, really like it.

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 January 2012

Very humane ending. a marvellous poem.

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 January 2012

Unexpected ending. A marvellous piece!

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 January 2012

Unexpected ending. A marvellous piece!

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 January 2012

Unexpected ending! A marvellous poem.

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Rajendran Muthiah 15 January 2012

You admire the extraordinary beauty not to devour like other beings but to thank God for such wonderful creation! This kind of unexpected ending makes the poem marvellous.

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