To Sun With Love Poem by Akhtar Jawad

To Sun With Love

Rating: 5.0


I know, I know, yes I know
Why did you spring beautiful flowers?
My deaf and dumb silent teacher,
The music down pouring in the showers
And response of earth by a silky greenery
I can read coded messages in the scenery.

You know, you know, yes you know,
It's a lovely evening and a pleasant twilight,
Lying on the wet carpet and waiting for,
My moon, that rises in a moonless night,
And your moon goes behind the sky.
The beloveds are so beautiful and shy!

I know, I know, yes I know,
What do you teach by springing flowers?
I am not deaf and dumb, I listen to, I sing,
What you convey through music of showers.
You can never tell how you loved her above,
Bu I shall write and sing my story of love.

You know, you know, yes you know,
My story but you cannot comment,
Here's a poet can write anything,
In love how much we are ardent,
Good Bye till dawn, see you again,
If you aren't hidden in eclipse's curtain.

Sunday, May 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

An interesting conversation with the sun. I know, I know, yes I know, What do you teach by springing flowers? I am not deaf and dumb, I listen to, I sing, What you convey through music of showers. You can never tell how you loved her above, Bu I shall write and sing my story of love. May you be blessed with sun's brilliant rays of love and light! 10+++

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Loke Kok Yee 28 May 2017

You praised the sun in a way that only you can and opened up a beautiful view for me. Thank you sir.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 May 2017

Beautiful poem. Music flowing on serenic beauty. Loved reading it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 May 2017

This is beautiful poetry with a great flow, rhyming and sweetness. Enjoyed the dance of words thoroughly. Thanks for posting.10+++

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 May 2017

A beautiful poem that touches........................................................

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