To My Dear Love Poem by Valérie Papy

To My Dear Love

Rating: 2.5


When I think of you,
The deepness of the sea I see,
I feel the respect in your eyes,
Where I can find the reality,
Of love I have for you.

You gave me something to believe in,
To look up for, in the sky,
I see, I read your name in the stars,
Where it brings you in my thoughts,
And I find you again.

A feeling comes to me,
To think of your lips,
I dream to kiss them,
Where I wonder the tast,
And feel free of my fears.

Could a dream mean a need to know?
To wonder and hope the reality,
In which I'll be standing,
Where I find our hands holding,
And love is what will keep us Alive.

Every moment that comes,
The fear to love you,
I feel the need to be beside you,
Where my reality is true,
And I will always love you.

When the time comes,
To be free of my fears,
I will tell you everything,
Where you and I will stand alone,
And Love Will Take Over

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Olivia Taylor 25 May 2005

Dear Valerie, I am also a new user. I am ten years old. DON'T stop reading because of my age since you are a teen ager, and I'm not. Anyway, I think that your poem To My Love was excellent. My poems are great, they're published in a book. My poems aren't silly, mine are excellent like yours. The only thing is that your poems have something deep to say, and are very mature. My poems are just great, but don't have that certain mature feel to it. I hope that one day, my poems will be as good as yours. Can you give me your opinion on my poems? The titles are Old Friend, America, Summertime, One of Those Days, and Flower. Keep writing, u r wonderful. Olivia

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