Tap Tap, Click Click
On the train
Leeds To London
Click Click go the mice
Strange Tunes from phones
Is there no time
To kick back
To take time
To enjoy the ride
Worker drones drone on
Click Click
Ring Ring
Work appears to end
Beer & wine from the trolley
Relax time
Work time
Travel time is now
Other times
Very clever - and it worked well when you read it out. Richard
I was on a train, full of office people, which was odd, as I normally travel at the weekend, this was during the week.
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I kind of had 'the night train' by WH Auden in my head at the time but trains do not make the noises they used to, and you do not get the sense of speed, with all these great suspension systems, but still, the Train had a sound, of it's own.