Time To Rise Poem by Hafsa Qureshi

Time To Rise

Rating: 4.8


little birdies praising God,
in fresh air near by dawn,
while you are snoozing flagrantly,
neglecting the time to rise and shine.
oh how ungratefull you are,
supremest creature of world you are,
thank THY LORD,
for all the things you own today
for home, for food, for work and play
for allthe friends you love so much
THANK THY LORD.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farid Uddin 23 January 2012

This is your wonderfull job.

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Chinedu Dike 25 April 2015

A well articulated Devotional piece of poetry written with spiritual insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2014

Beautiful and impressive, must be rated 10.

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Jahan Zeb 24 February 2012

I don't know why but I felt like reading again and again. very very nice.

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Jahan Zeb 24 February 2012

Flowing and fascinating. oh how ungrateful you are, supremest creature of world you are, ........ very touching. Impressed little Hafsa.......

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Shahzia Batool 19 February 2012

BEAUTIFUL...With all sweetness n innocence...eye-catching, n arresting line little birdies praising God, ....never lets the reader go anywhere b/4 completing the poem... :)

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