Time Poem by Jacquie StewartHeimann

Time

Rating: 5.0


Like two leaves
Gently swirling, twirling
Briefly touching
Floating through the air
Lives intermingle
Fates combine
Until life blows
Her gentle breath
And we float on
Into sweet, blissful oblivion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 14 January 2008

yet beautiful poem, i like it, well penned with economy of words and i offer 10+, thankis for sharing

0 0 Reply
R H 16 June 2006

Lovely comparison of those fleeting moments conveyed with such an economy of words Kind regards, Justine

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success