Thy Stronger Thy Devotion. Poem by Julie Houl

Thy Stronger Thy Devotion.

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Invited into thy domain of society,
flattered by thy devotion.
Established with in a fine month of determiny,
explored in just a fine two.

Oblivious from thys rebelious mistakes,
thy stronger thy devotion.
Thy methamphetamine came with misunderstandings,
thy stronger thy devotion.

Thy more thy pathetic feelings of heartache,
thus paranoia begun.
Thy has begun a choice of termination,
to let thou perish away to die.

No more feelings of paranoia and pain,
but the memories left to reminisce and the absent of thys great lost.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cortez Mccall 26 January 2010

very well stated and so boldly put. very well done!

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