Three Shorts Poem by Andy Brookes

Three Shorts



Flap

Our egos can make us fly
then reality sets in and we crash wings on fire.

Razor

love is a two edged sword requited and un.

Live Love Laugh

death is the fly in life's ointment
but worry not everyone's in the same boat
spend your time living, loving and laughing
it won't save you but it will make life worth while.

Wednesday, February 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: laughter,life,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 08 April 2019

(cont.) 2 - 3rd? definition i found for REQUITE: verb " respond to (love or affection): return." SO, i guess, by " un" , you mean 'not returned' (love) in U.S. i'd use 'worthwhile' or 'worth one's while'. but you ain't in U.S.! ! all 3 shorts are worth pondering, and should be taught in grade school. to MyPoemList bri :)

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Bri Edwards 08 April 2019

1 - " Definition of double-edged sword.: something that has or can have both favorable and unfavorable consequences" ... so it's risky offering/giving LOVE (clearly a 4-letter word) . (cont.)

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 February 2019

Live Love Laugh.................///impressive part

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