Thoughts Of You Poem by breanna wilson

Thoughts Of You



Heaven is
all those laughs,
those smiles,
all those great times,
Hell is
all those tears,
Those cuts,
All those sad times,
I've found that
Heaven is easier than Hell,
But there is
one thing
That can bring you
Hell, and thats the thoughts of you! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 10 November 2007

This poem Sounds a bit harsh I see that you are bitter about somebody Don't you like that person? If you don't it is ok Maybe you are going through some rough times Yes you need a friend that you can trust

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Coreena Dejesus 10 November 2007

Nice twist at the end. enjoyed reading *Hugz* CC

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