Thoughts, Always Poem by Overkill MindSpaceApocalypse

Thoughts, Always

Rating: 4.5


She thinks of things that
Happened years ago and yesterday,
She thinks of things that
She did and said, or didn't do or say,
She thinks of things that
Went wrong and bad memories replay,
She thinks of things that
Could've been, it's always been that way.

Thoughts, Always
Sunday, January 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: regret,sad,thinking
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Laying in bed every night, thinking, unable to sleep. She recounts conversations, choices, mistakes, and everything negative from recent or distant past. Inspired by life the quote 'Of all the words of tongue or pen, the are 'what might've been'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mirjana Miric Inalman 04 January 2016

The poem's structure depicts very well the vicious cycle of these thoughts, it's length reminiscing a chant. Nicely done.

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