Thoughts Poem by Lora Colon

Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


Thoughts of you come floating by
Like feathers on a breeze,
Gentle thoughts that calm my heart
And put my mind at ease

Each thought of you is like a flower
That's blooming just for me,
Radiant hues of love and peace
Create my tapestry

And so I send my thoughts to you,
Each one a whispered word,
Like spirits hiding in the dark,
But longing to be heard

Loving thoughts that my mind creates
Float on the dust of time,
Thoughts encased in golden clouds,
Feelings.... with words that rhyme

Thoughts attached to burnished wings
Long to take to the sky,
I kiss them gently, and set them free....
Straight to your heart, may they fly!

Thursday, March 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Lessard 20 March 2014

Wonderful and heartwarming

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Muhammad Ali 29 March 2014

A light ideal romantic poem. May these thoughts remain with you. Read mine 'how can i count' when time permits.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 March 2014

Feelings.... with words that rhyme and you do it Lora so beautifully!

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Brian Johnston 24 March 2014

I hope that every loving thought that you release to the sky will reward you in return with a buzz that thanks you for it's freedom, just like my Cicadas used to buzz my my hand thanking me for their freedom when I let them go.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 March 2014

These are beautiful thoughts! I too have thoughts like these. But alas! I cannot say as beautifully! Your poem is sweet, as I said earlier about other poems too, like a song, melodious, takes one to dreams. Like many others, this poem of yours too deserves 10/10.

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Chuy Amante 20 March 2014

Spectacular! ! ! I really like your style! It FEELS great! !

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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