`*~ This Time ~*` Poem by Thad Wilk

`*~ This Time ~*`

Rating: 3.3


This time, as she is escorted from the
elevator and to the exit door. She has a
date with fate and can't be late. For she
has a new chance at life in store
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The monkey be her only company, when
she first arrived. Had family, not intervened
upon the scene. Surely, she would have
not survived.
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She pulls down her sleeves as she leaves
so as not to show. The needle marks that
scarred her arms, not so long ago.
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This time, '' she will '' put an end to it. She
has kicked the smack and won't look back.
With the Lord beside her, He shalt guide her
she has now the strength and hope to quit.
~
This time, she will conquer the horrors of
addiction. One day at a time, step by step
she shalt beat this sad affliction. This time
she will fight and with all of her might !
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Though 'twill be a long, long journey. Full of
shards of jagged rock and stone. She shall
not be alone. She will not falter and her plans
they won't alter. This time, she shalt find -
her way home....

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~TJW~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 20 April 2009

This is really great Thad, a true masterpiece. A most uplififting and spiritual piece. Best wishes, Andrew

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Meggie Gultiano 20 April 2009

She shall Not be alone. She will not falter and her plans They won't alter. This time, she shalt find - Her way home.... This really touched my heart, and you have ended your piece great. thanks for this wonderful sharing,

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Tsira Goge 19 April 2009

Thad, She hide the hands... very touching o passage... You have well seized of lady's character. I wish to note too, the ending is simply remarkable! 10....... Tsira

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 18 April 2009

Well Thad with a friend like you, I'm sure she'll kick the habbit and love her life again... Andy 10

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Fiona Davidson 18 April 2009

Great write Thad...reads so beautifully...I can feel both optimism and poignancy in each line...Fi 10+++

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