This Sequence Poem by Ajit Das

This Sequence

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The long afternoon inches away,
measuring as though its own hollowness.

Grammar of life punctuates this phase
at the most unswervable turn of the road
where terminate the concord days
in drooping moments.

Life flows on the same as before;
those familiar sights, sounds, colours
confuse me into a belief:
I am still a part of it.

But something is lost irretrievably;
what I see is not me,
my shadow lengthening.

Outside, the sunset draws a curtain
of smoke and dust on the fading landscape.
A strange calmness descends,
but brings no comfort.
It only sedates the inner turbulence.

Wednesday, December 16, 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 16 December 2015

The sequence of mental state from afternoon to the sun set has been narrated very beautifully. My pick of lines in this composition are,1.The long afternoon inches away measuring it's own hollowness 2.Grammar of life punctuates this phase 3. It only sedates the inner turbulence. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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