This Race Poem by Frandy Osias Louis

This Race

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I feel out of place
I'm keeping it steady
But I just can't win this race
I was once yours
But now its so hard to see
Cause when I look into your eyes
The image isn't me
Your feeling afraid
So scared to commit
I try 2 speak what I feel
But your feelings u seem to omit
I'm feeling so low
My heart feels so weak
So full of love for you
Which I'm forced 2 not speak
Time is for ever
and so is what I feel
I'm stuck within its days
Of what I want to be real
Now I feel out of luck
And my heart still skips a beat
Still pushing to fight
As I'm reaching defeat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Flose Boursiquot 03 January 2009

wow Frandy.... this is a great one. i didn't even know u wrote poems like that. i love it. type deep

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