This Man In Me Poem by Jay Garmino

This Man In Me

Rating: 3.0


Today there's man inside, a lover,
Too far down collide with his heart.
Never leave footprints nowhere under,
Never lies to his heart even the truth marks.

Gazed by each sun on his face of worries,
Running minds in the midst of troubles.
He will never leave but keep his promise,
He never lost his eternal love in sorrows.

Enlightened by the force of challenges,
To which only prayers his might conceived.
Nothing left but the courage of changes,
His seasoned love to her Feunee is destined.

Today is going till dawn of sunset rest upon,
The well of this man strives and keep his promise.
Whatever challenges in any morrows to come,
Eternal love reveals from the man inside of me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jay Garmino 29 August 2008

Thank you so much.. really appreciated!

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Rehab Helmy 28 August 2008

I really like it. this honest man who is ready to keep his promise good luck and keep sharing with us ur own thoughts and feelings

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