There Sits A Lonely Girl! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Tracey Collins

There Sits A Lonely Girl! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.5


There sits a lonely girl
don`t know which way to turn.
She wants to turn to the right
to be near here man.
But her left side
tells her to run.
But the lonely girl is
truely in LOVE with her man
The man just won`t open up
his eyes and see the true love.
He rather fight his past and
ruin A good thing in front of him.
The lonely girl will
stand by her true LOVE.
And hold on threw the fight of his
life, until he get his life back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 13 May 2006

this one is good, Tracey. i think it illustrates very well the internal struggle a woman feels when she is debating whether or not to go or stay - she knows it would be best to leave but every thread in her heart is pulling the other way. endearing & desperate - makes the piece lovable.

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