Summer Storm.....And Sunset.... Poem by Tracey Collins

Summer Storm.....And Sunset....

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Way up North we
Drove to this nice
Summer Resort
Called Port El gin.

Stayed A couple of nights
On that second night
Geoff and I decided to
take A drive to the beach...

We sat on A few rocks
By the pier looking out
At the water and waiting
To see A sun set.....

Then all at once the
Wind started to blow
The Marina LifeGuard
Came out and clear the beach...

That's when we ran back
To are car and watched
The Summer Storm
Come in off the lake....

The wind blew the tree
Branches all around
Then all at once the rain
started to fall real fast....

With in A hour or so
The Summer Storm
Started to slow down
The rain had stop......

But to are surprise
The sun came back
Out and gave us A real
Amazing Sun Set........

What A nice drive
Up North can do
to make two Love birds
enjoy them self watching

That Summer Storm
and A beautiful sunset
to end A vary short trip
Up to Port El gin.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 August 2006

WELCOME BACK, LADY T.....I LIKE THE SUBJECT MATTER VERY MIUCH...RIDES WITH THE SEASON...CREATIVE WRITE'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/fjr

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Lisa Wilkinson 21 August 2006

Ooh this sounds like a beautiful place to stay Tracey. xox

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Michael Gale 21 August 2006

Yeah, a nasy storm can put an abrupt end to a nice day but i can see that ya did not let it ruin yer day. Ya just looked at the bright side of it and made a beautiful day and memory of it. I commend you for that. Not many people does that these days. Nice poem. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Geoff Warden 16 August 2006

great poem Trace.......the thyme has great imagry.........

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Patricia Gale 16 August 2006

How splendid of you to share this piece with us. A wonderful relaxing time. Memories are made of these.

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Duncan Wyllie 16 August 2006

This sounds so personal and beautiful, like something very precious captured in your wonderful words Love duncan X

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