There Be, There Be Poem by Ross Mackay

There Be, There Be

Rating: 5.0


The shimmer of the morning cold
seemed to stroke its fingers across
my late morning dream.
You turned towards me,
a smile pressed the fontanelle
of my lucid vulnerability.
Languid, the chill of the outside
rippled through the windows
whilst I lay most content.
The halls were golden,
there was a swimming pool,
as I remember.
There you lay between a mirror
and the orchestra played Greensleeves.
You had turned away to face me
and smiled through me at first.
Your skin was golden
and the hall smelled sweet of summer.
I felt the touch of daisies as the room melted away
until just you and I shared a warm smile
and your stomach was pressed upon mine.
Honest and genuine,
I haven't seen you in some time.
Throughout my day,
my weeks and even years.
There you remain in memory,
teasing.
Sleep's pintle,
I questioned.
Lucidly awake I begged,
Sleepily drifting I forget.
The deep brown of your eyes let the world fall behind us
as my soul was transformed and I explored
the depths of your soul in that long long stare.
'We'll meet again' she said delicately.
The band left me giddy.
I felt so warm.
Your eyes left me
against formality.
The room was dead.
The arms around me were mine.
A strong tear was all that remained.
Oh my folly,
come back to me!
Come back to me!
The room was dead.
The following sleep was a lonely field of snow,
at least with her gone.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm a very lucid dreamer. This poem, was based on a dream- the girl was a former friend of mine. There was also a shark pit behind me, as I recall- though if I included that, I'd loose the effect somewhat. I wonder what Sigmund Freud would say about that?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kasia Fedyk 18 May 2012

Exceptional, fantastic, breathtaking. I love the sensuality in this one Ross, the transformation of the soul, reflection, mirror, merging with another, maybe a dream, maybe a tear, its vivid and real, pure genius, this is what I feel through this poem, what a journey and I love it! ! ! ! ! Thank you Ross! ! !

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Jennifer Cramer 16 April 2012

I really like the image this poem creates. Its beautiful.

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Linda Maree 13 March 2012

beautiful use of words

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