Therapeutic Dish Washing Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Therapeutic Dish Washing

Rating: 5.0


Filthy cup
Just soaking
Detergent
Sprayed throughout
Saucer now
Deep dish dirt
Floating forth
Dishing dirth

Monday, July 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: didactic,therapy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 19 July 2017

M.J, thank you for thinking that the last line is perfection. And yes, the metaphor is most definitely there!

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Mj Lemon 19 July 2017

That last line is perfection, Richard. And as I reread the poem for a third time, I realize that your words can stand as a metaphor for a conversation I had just this morning. Great poem, Richard. A 10.

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Rajnish Manga 17 July 2017

I love the way you have taken up the topic and treated it as a meaningful experience. The comments and your reply are quite interesting. Thanks, Richard.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 July 2017

Rajnish, dish washing can be a meditative experience. Thank you for reading and commenting. Always greatly appreciated!

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