The Wrong Perfecting The Right Poem by Richard Wlodarski

The Wrong Perfecting The Right

Rating: 5.0


In perfecting
The damned perfect
I am so wrong

Thursday, September 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: wrong vs. right
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 18 September 2020

You have that right... when I sketch or paint a picture, I think I should add a line here or a color there and does that ever mess up a perfectly average picture... well, okay, I mess up a picture that already looks a mess but I get what you're saying... I like the structure of this piece as well as the tone of the confession.... I'll try giving you a 10 but PH score card doesn't seem to work and faving seems to be a thing of the past

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