The Threat Poem by cold september

The Threat

Rating: 3.5


For every breath
which you have set
inside my soul
and
for every teardrop
which has fallen
and will fall

you will pay
with loving me
more
then I love you
someday

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ngaio beck 17 July 2008

The pinnacle of bitterness.Sorry.

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Neil Marsden 26 January 2008

whether it is threatening or not depends on your perception of it, such is the quality of the piece - well done! Neil.

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Katey Farmer 24 January 2008

this is amazing...it would scare me if it were directed towards me...perfect

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