The Sun Poem by Chuy Amante
The Sun
The warmth of Sun here!
Its rays touching seer.
Earth's cool surface warms,
the night's dew it harms.
drying ~ caloric
Dark's antithesis
Photosynthesis!
(half a Sonnet)
Thursday, March 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm a life hacker so I figured, why not cut a 'Sonnet' in half.
I just looked up 'sonnet' this morning: 14 lines,10 syllables...
Why not make it more concise?
Here's my hack 7 lines,5 syl...
Now show me yours!
I just looked up 'sonnet' this morning: 14 lines,10 syllables...
Why not make it more concise?
Here's my hack 7 lines,5 syl...
Now show me yours!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak
21 March 2014
Think I'll leave it to you BH, this one's good as it is. RoseAnn
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4/26/2024 10:17:07 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Verily, a good verse, Loved reading it. I invite you to read my poems